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He's amazing, isn't he?
That boy behind that silly mask.
They say he's too different;
some say outcast who lets himself be mocked.
But look a little closer.
That light- see it?
I do.
I always have.
I think he's just simply wonderful.
Don't you?
If you've noticed, behind the shyness,
he's like the sweetest song.
Gentle strums, hard beats, soft rings;
and the voice... I bet you'd fall in love with it to.
And you know the best part about him?
He says the same thing about you.
Everyday.
He's amazing.
Isn't he?
:iconsilentstruggle:

Author's Comments

I still need to work on my writing skills. I should have never dropped it. Oh well. I'm trying to work on expressing myself more openly. I fell asleep feeling this. Enjoy, world.

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:icondisposable-h3ro:
I am so close to crying at the beauty of this poem it's amazing :D
:iconsilentstruggle:
Wow, really? ^^; Thanks so much! :hug: Much Love!

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Blake: I can see it now. "What?! You ate the last apple! Quick, here is 500 dollars and a ticket to Canada." "But dad, she will know that I ate it. You don't eat apples." "BLAKE!!!" "... I do now son, I do now."
:icondisposable-h3ro:
yes really, your very welcome :)
:iconshatteringglasseye:
Very well written! This is awesome! :hug:

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The liquid glory that is the greatest beverage in the world shall rain from the heavens when I finally finish my Sunkist rain machine --The God of Sunkist
:iconsilentstruggle:
:smooch:

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Blake: I can see it now. "What?! You ate the last apple! Quick, here is 500 dollars and a ticket to Canada." "But dad, she will know that I ate it. You don't eat apples." "BLAKE!!!" "... I do now son, I do now."
:iconshatteringglasseye:
:tighthug: I love you!

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The liquid glory that is the greatest beverage in the world shall rain from the heavens when I finally finish my Sunkist rain machine --The God of Sunkist
:iconsamiryawar:
Oh my gosh!

The simplicity of this piece is just so deep. Its so clear to all and sundry...

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Nothing in practice screams inspiration,
than getting ourselves into sticky situations!
:iconsilentstruggle:
^^; Thankz so much!! :hug:

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Blake: I can see it now. "What?! You ate the last apple! Quick, here is 500 dollars and a ticket to Canada." "But dad, she will know that I ate it. You don't eat apples." "BLAKE!!!" "... I do now son, I do now."
:iconsilentstruggle:
I love you, too! ^^

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Blake: I can see it now. "What?! You ate the last apple! Quick, here is 500 dollars and a ticket to Canada." "But dad, she will know that I ate it. You don't eat apples." "BLAKE!!!" "... I do now son, I do now."

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